There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.
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寫(xiě)法:這篇習(xí)作是按照時(shí)間順序記敘周末的活動(dòng),記敘了周六和周日的上午和下午分別做了哪些活動(dòng)及對(duì)活動(dòng)的感受。
即:周六上午:舞蹈課→下午:做作業(yè)和幫媽媽做清潔→周日上午:看望祖父母→下午:閱讀→晚上:看電視,與父母交流→感受:高興和愉快。
我們還可以選取周六和周日中的幾個(gè)比較主要的活動(dòng)來(lái)寫(xiě),先說(shuō)明什么時(shí)間在什么地方由什么人做了什么事,有什么感受。再按照活動(dòng)順序把活動(dòng)內(nèi)容寫(xiě)清楚,最后抒發(fā)一下對(duì)這次活動(dòng)或這個(gè)周末的感想。
時(shí)態(tài):這篇短文我們可以用三種時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě): a.一般過(guò)去時(shí)(主要描述你上個(gè)周末是怎樣度過(guò)的);b.一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)(主要描述你經(jīng)常怎樣度過(guò)周末);c.一般將來(lái)時(shí)(主要描述你要怎樣過(guò)周末)。這里我們來(lái)表述平時(shí)是如何過(guò)周末的,所以采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。
注意:活動(dòng)的相關(guān)表達(dá)方法可采用舊知識(shí),eg.(例)起床get up,和新知識(shí),eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易錯(cuò)寫(xiě)成nu。還要注意不要出現(xiàn)病句,eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要寫(xiě)成 “I often with my parents watch TV .” 詞量上控制在50 ~ 80 之間。