I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.
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這篇作文的題目是“我的一周”,小作者沒有說一些空話,而是從自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫起,敘述了自己一周七天的所作所為,并特別強(qiáng)調(diào)了星期天的喜好,寫得自然、流暢。
小朋友們寫作文時(shí)要注意人稱及謂語動(dòng)詞的變化,要依據(jù)提示,結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際,寫自己身邊熟悉的事情。